L. O. V. E.
Some say its meaning is greatly misinterpreted,
But I would like to suggest otherwise,
Because it is this feeling that keeps me excited,
And it remains why there are always glitters in my eyes.
The simple four letter word is love,
And the much expected season is Valentine.
Go grab your partner and keep her close,
For this season is a special one.
The simple four letter word is love,
And am fueling mine up with turpentine.
Anyone who comes between us will receive some “blows”,
For this love is reserved for you, my special one.
Your poem on love is great. L.o.v.e indeed, is very complex but your piece exposes love as being simple. Generally based on the fact that; valentine has greeted you both in a love fuelled season. I can’t disagree any better.
Your endlines rhyming is nice bro…. and your thoughts are explicit, if not for the incoherency in structure.
Thanks Bro! But then, I think Love is very simple. And the structure of this writing is intentionally muddled.
This can only be written by a man in Love!!!
Hahaha. We need to travel back in time. February 2014.
Pidho are u in love? Who is she?
Spell her name
Hahaha. This was in 2014. Pressure.
Beautiful piece there
Thank you for the feedback.
Awww. So sweet
Thanks for reading.
OmG!!! I have got goosebumps.
Hahaha, and why is that?
I guess the piece hit a spot for me… I guess????
Hahaha. I can only guess too.
…..that is indeed the four letter word called L.O.V.E. Nice one, keep it up.
Thanks. 🙂